Campus Girl
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By: Jezen Joy B. Abon
Vannah is 18 years old. She is tall her hair is long, curly and blonde. She is a second year student at St. Catherine University ( SCU ) . she is a loving daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Ramirez a tycoon business man . among three of his siblings vannah is her favorite . although all of his daughter is beautiful and intelligent. They grew in a normal life .the second child of Mr. Ramirez is Innah she is twelve years old she is a first year student at St. Catherine High Academy ( SCA ). While Rhia is the youngest she is six years old. She is cute and talented.she knows how to play piano and violin.
Mr. Angelo Ramirez is working at the Ramirez corporation. While Mrs. Ramirez has her own business too a restaurant named Cha’s Cuisine. The restaurant was named after her Charlene Chui Ramirez . she is a half chinese. Although Mrs.Ramirez spend her time at Cha’s cuisine she is always a hands on mommy. She prepared food for them. She is always checked the assignment of her kids. And she did not forget to have a bonding with them.
Vannah is a fine arts student major in advertising. She is also a candidate of St. catherine University Campus sweet heart. Vannah’s friend rikki nominated her. Today is the campus sweet heart screening Rikki said . I don’t want to join vannah said no you’re beautiful, tall, sexy, and off course intelligent. That’s what you think I’m a shy type person . oh god that is Celine Villa rigth? A candidate also for miss campus sweet heart. See she is so pretty. Vannah believe me you’re beautiful. I’m not qualified for that pagent. You see Claudette Munoz, Star Villa monte? They are the tittle holders. And look at me. No girl believe me you’re beautiful.
The girls are shouting “ oh my God that is Bret allan Jackson rigth?” the former president of Alpha Capha Omega. He is so handsome “ I love you Bret Jackson” woooo…..woooo......woooo………
At the library vannah enjoy reading about the story the note book. Because she was amaze with the author. So she always read the story. Then suddenly Bret jackson sit beside her. Then suddenly their eyes are twitching. Hi I’m Bret Allan Jackson…..I’m Cheska Vannah Ramirez. You love also to read? No I am studying because this is a nice place and a perfect place to study on. Well yeah you’re rigth , you’re a fine arts student? Bret asked because he saw her notebook with her name and course indicated their. Yes I’m second year student major in advertising. How about you?. Vannah asked I’m 22 years old engineering student a former President of Alpha Capha Omega. I live in your country for almost two years. Now I’m loving my stay here. I hope you may not opened if I tell you I hate Americans she smiled. If you want to know more about me I’m willing to tell you more. No I’m not interested “ouch” he grinned. Why do you hate americans?. I have to go thanks Mr. Bret Jackson. But I’m so sorry I have to go.
At the coffee shop Celine is waiting for Bret . vannah is also their with her friend rikki. But suddenlt Bret sit beside vannah. Hi miss cute Bret said. You again you’re like a mean to me I said I hate americans so you can please live us alone please. Hi Bret said Celine at the next table after them. Come let’s have coffee. Celine was Bret’s ex Girl friend for two years. They are not happy. Because celine is a typical girl friend, she is not contented.
One day Bret want’s to talk to vannah how are you? Bret asked…I’m noy okay vannah replied why? Because you saw me here in the campus today?... no I am not feeling well because I’m not ready for the campus sweet heart hmmmp…… and besides I’m not interested about that pagent… why you’re pretty, tall and sexy I feel so nevous I’m not prepared for this pagent. No vannah I will support you from now on I’m your no.1 fan. Please give me all your tickets… why she asked… just give your tickets to me… I don’t think so… just give your tickets to me and never asked , you will see trust me…
In the afternoon Bret’s make a tarpulin, pliers and t-shirt. It stated their please vote for miss Cheska Vannah Ramirez for miss campus sweet heart. And he sell tickets at the alpha room together with his friends. Dude who is this girl? mark asked… a friend of mine … you’re friend or your new Girl friend… no dude she is only a friend.
At the Alpha Capha Omega room there is Bret together with his friends selling tickets, giving pliers and t-shirts. While Bret sell tickets. Five ticketsfor one kiss. All girls fall in line on the room they wait their chance to kiss Bret because he is handsome. And yet many girls have a crush on him.
Vannah saw what bret is doing. She saw many kiss mark on Bret’s face.why are you doing this vannah said I’m just helping you because I want to help you to win this pagent. Is that your way to help me… definitely yes.. o well thank you but you don’t have to do that I can sell my own tickets… just stop acting like that I’m just helping you… for what? Because as I’ve said I wat you to win.
Hey… hey.. hey wait you’re Celine Villa right?... yes why?....will you make it fast can’t you see I’m .so busy selling my tickets, what is that all about celine said. You know Bret Allan Jackson you’re boy friend selling the tickets of vannah Ramirez . the one of the candidate for miss campus sweet heart? … what are you serious?.... hmmmmffff… yes I saw him at the alpha Capha omega room selling five tickets for one kiss. Is bret’s going crazy?,, Lets go girls I want to see them…
Hi Bret…” mhhuuwahh” what are you doing here?... I’m selling the tickets of miss vannah Ramirez.. oh I see, why are you doing these bret? For charity hahahahaha… no I’m just helping her… for what celine saked is vannah is your new girl friend?... of course not… oh come on bret why are you doing this I’m also your friend rigth if you don’t mind can you please do me a favor?... yeah sure what is it?... can you please sell also my tickets?... no I will not do that because I have many tickets here and I promised to miss vannah to sell all her tickets and I will support her… okay fine I’ll go ahead … I’m sorry Celine I hope you understand.
At the coffee shop vannah and rikki are talking… how many tickets did you sold rikki ? good news I sold 10 pads. What about you?. I sold 2pads only. I told you I’m not qualified for that. Don’t worry Bret is helping us… hhhmmmff….
Hey miss Cheska Vannah Ramirez right?... yes I am.. hi I’m Celine Villa…. Oh yeah I know you you are also a candidate for miss campus sweet heart… I their any thing wrong? What can I do for you vannah asked… I’ll be honest with you please live my boy friend are you obsess with him?... shout up how dare you to say that excuse me miss I’m not that kind of girl you was talking for. In fact Mr. Bret Allan Jackson is you’re ex boy friend rigth? So how dare you to act like that… and besides don’t worry I’m not interested with Bret… now you can please live us now… it’s not of your business if bret sells my tickets . can you please live us alone. We have our own business to discuss. And yet Celine was so speechless.
Hey Vannah can I talk to you?Bret asked , Bret pulled her hands I want to talk to you ... okay fine.he pulled her in the art building at the maintenance room. Bret hold her hands. Why do you bring me here. I didn’t realize I pulled on you she growled with irritation. You’re a mean vannah said are you really that merciless, or do you just really hate me because I’m american. We are not close vannah said. I have to go I have a class at these time. Okay fine Bret open the door but suddenly “ shit were trapped”. Ha? But why are you kidding? Hey don’t worry we won’t be trapped here for long. The janitor in this building will soon find us. It’s all you’re fault vannah said … hey don’t blame me, things happen for a reason. So why don’t we take this opportunity to get to know each other. Vannah lean on the wall, and take a deep breath. You’re so different. “You don’t even know how to say sorry” because I said everything happens for a reason. They all happen to make way for other significant occurrences. In our lives or other people. So there is nothing to be sorry for. I didn’t believe you say that . you’re the only person I know that you believe on that. Vannah said.. well I have a first experience. My mom said I was the biggest mistake in her life. I was born by accident, by mistake , if I treated my life as one big mistake like the way she treated me, maybe I won’t be who I am now. She was shocked with him . I wasn’t treated well by my mom so does that should feel sorry for my self for the rest of my life.
I don’t believe you’re a easy going and naughty you have a problem in your mom. I believe I turn out well I am a big mistake do you agree? She smiled. Hey mister Janitor can you please help us we are trapped here. Thanks God somebody will help us to live here. I told you somebody will find us.
At the school theater the most awaited event was held the search for miss campus sweet heart 2011. every one are excited. The family of vannah are all present. Because they will support and pray so that vannah will win in this contest.everytime vannah is taking the floor everyone is standing ovation. They are shouting for the name of vannah. And the most awaited part the question and answer portion. May we call on contestant number 9 miss Celine villa here is your question. “ what is the essence of being a woman” thank you for that wonderful question the essence of being a woman is.. is.. is.. is… how do you prepare for your future. How you make your life complete that’s all thank you.. now may we call on contestant number 14 miss Cheska Vannah Ramirez. Here is your question. “ how do you prepare for this wonderful night” before I answer that question I want to greet my family, my friends and specially the people that supported me right now. Good evening to all of you. Now how I prepare for this night is first I prepare my self and thank god to given me stregth. And specially I prepare my self that no matter what happen win or loose I will do my best that’s all thank you.
The judge will soon announced the winner. This is the criteria for judging. Personality 25%, question and answer 25%, talent 25%, audience impact 10%, voting 15% with a total of 100%. To announce the winner may we call on our president Mr. Kelvin Yap. Garnering with the total score of 98.67% or SCU campus sweet heart 2011, is no other than candidate number 14 miss cheska vannah Ramirez… every one are happy , everyone are shouting. You deserve it that’s my daugther said mr. ramirez.
After seven months , Vannah and Bret see each other at the coffee shop. Hi vannah how are you?... oh hi Bret I’m fine how about you… I’m fine come join me you want coffee?... hhmmm yes!... by the way thanks for helping me to miss campus sweet heart… welcome, I told you you’re the next miss campus sweet heart…thanks for supporting me… it’s okay never mind that… thanks again for what you’ve done I don’t know how can I pay you for what you did… what if I invite you for a dinner?.. Huh a dinner? Yes a dinner date on Tuesday maybe if it is okay with you… okay no problem.. okay thanks, I will pick up you on Tuesday evening at exactly 7:00 o’clock if it is okay with you… yeah sure…
At 7:00 o’clock in the evening Bret goes to vannah’s house “beep, beep, beep, beep”… yaya will you please open the gate maybe it’s Bret Allan Jackson my visitor. Hi sir Good evening, please come in… good evening too, where is vannah?... she is on her room sir wait I will call her… vannah you have a visitor he is on the living room… for a while yaya…
Good evening sir Bret said to vannah’s Father…. I’m Bret Allan Jackson… Good evening too I’m Mr. Angelo Ramirez Vannah’s father… where will you go? At the Rock well sir if you don’t mind I hace a dinner with your daughther sir… that’s okay with me but bring my daughther here at exactly 11:00 o’clock, and please take care of my daugthershe is pa precious to me so please take care of her… yes sir I will do what you say I will bring here at exactly 11:00 o’clock… Hey sweetie Bret is waiting for you so please hurry up… yes Dad.
Bret saw Vannah wearing red dress and Red high heels… you’re so pretty for this night… thank you… can we go now… yes… sir can we go now?... yes but plese take care of her, and do what I say… yes sir thank you for trusting me….
At the restaurant, Bret is so gentle man . he prepared a romantic dinner, with red flowers, romantic music, and candle light in a very romantic place… I rent this restaurant for this night. And I prepare it for you, I hope you like it… yes I like it, I don’t believe there’s a man do it for me and besides this was dreamed by every woman to date with somebody, in a nice and romantic place.
Waiter, good evening sir ma’am. Vannah you can order everything you want. There is a romantic song while they are eating. Vannah you want ice cream Bret asked… yes that .is my favorite the cookies and cream flavor…while vannah is eating the ice cream there’s a ring inside… what is this? vannah asked… Bret get the ring and kneel beside her… Vannah can you be my Girl friend? Bret asked…and vannah was so speechless I waited for this moment come. So I asked you again vannah can you be my girl friend? Bret close his eyes because he is afraid whether vannah will say yes or no.. and finally vannah say “ Yes I can be your girl friend” . and Bret was so happy because finally vannah is now his Girl friend.
By: Jezen Joy B. Abon
Vannah is 18 years old. She is tall her hair is long, curly and blonde. She is a second year student at St. Catherine University ( SCU ) . she is a loving daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Ramirez a tycoon business man . among three of his siblings vannah is her favorite . although all of his daughter is beautiful and intelligent. They grew in a normal life .the second child of Mr. Ramirez is Innah she is twelve years old she is a first year student at St. Catherine High Academy ( SCA ). While Rhia is the youngest she is six years old. She is cute and talented.she knows how to play piano and violin.
Mr. Angelo Ramirez is working at the Ramirez corporation. While Mrs. Ramirez has her own business too a restaurant named Cha’s Cuisine. The restaurant was named after her Charlene Chui Ramirez . she is a half chinese. Although Mrs.Ramirez spend her time at Cha’s cuisine she is always a hands on mommy. She prepared food for them. She is always checked the assignment of her kids. And she did not forget to have a bonding with them.
Vannah is a fine arts student major in advertising. She is also a candidate of St. catherine University Campus sweet heart. Vannah’s friend rikki nominated her. Today is the campus sweet heart screening Rikki said . I don’t want to join vannah said no you’re beautiful, tall, sexy, and off course intelligent. That’s what you think I’m a shy type person . oh god that is Celine Villa rigth? A candidate also for miss campus sweet heart. See she is so pretty. Vannah believe me you’re beautiful. I’m not qualified for that pagent. You see Claudette Munoz, Star Villa monte? They are the tittle holders. And look at me. No girl believe me you’re beautiful.
The girls are shouting “ oh my God that is Bret allan Jackson rigth?” the former president of Alpha Capha Omega. He is so handsome “ I love you Bret Jackson” woooo…..woooo......woooo………
At the library vannah enjoy reading about the story the note book. Because she was amaze with the author. So she always read the story. Then suddenly Bret jackson sit beside her. Then suddenly their eyes are twitching. Hi I’m Bret Allan Jackson…..I’m Cheska Vannah Ramirez. You love also to read? No I am studying because this is a nice place and a perfect place to study on. Well yeah you’re rigth , you’re a fine arts student? Bret asked because he saw her notebook with her name and course indicated their. Yes I’m second year student major in advertising. How about you?. Vannah asked I’m 22 years old engineering student a former President of Alpha Capha Omega. I live in your country for almost two years. Now I’m loving my stay here. I hope you may not opened if I tell you I hate Americans she smiled. If you want to know more about me I’m willing to tell you more. No I’m not interested “ouch” he grinned. Why do you hate americans?. I have to go thanks Mr. Bret Jackson. But I’m so sorry I have to go.
At the coffee shop Celine is waiting for Bret . vannah is also their with her friend rikki. But suddenlt Bret sit beside vannah. Hi miss cute Bret said. You again you’re like a mean to me I said I hate americans so you can please live us alone please. Hi Bret said Celine at the next table after them. Come let’s have coffee. Celine was Bret’s ex Girl friend for two years. They are not happy. Because celine is a typical girl friend, she is not contented.
One day Bret want’s to talk to vannah how are you? Bret asked…I’m noy okay vannah replied why? Because you saw me here in the campus today?... no I am not feeling well because I’m not ready for the campus sweet heart hmmmp…… and besides I’m not interested about that pagent… why you’re pretty, tall and sexy I feel so nevous I’m not prepared for this pagent. No vannah I will support you from now on I’m your no.1 fan. Please give me all your tickets… why she asked… just give your tickets to me… I don’t think so… just give your tickets to me and never asked , you will see trust me…
In the afternoon Bret’s make a tarpulin, pliers and t-shirt. It stated their please vote for miss Cheska Vannah Ramirez for miss campus sweet heart. And he sell tickets at the alpha room together with his friends. Dude who is this girl? mark asked… a friend of mine … you’re friend or your new Girl friend… no dude she is only a friend.
At the Alpha Capha Omega room there is Bret together with his friends selling tickets, giving pliers and t-shirts. While Bret sell tickets. Five ticketsfor one kiss. All girls fall in line on the room they wait their chance to kiss Bret because he is handsome. And yet many girls have a crush on him.
Vannah saw what bret is doing. She saw many kiss mark on Bret’s face.why are you doing this vannah said I’m just helping you because I want to help you to win this pagent. Is that your way to help me… definitely yes.. o well thank you but you don’t have to do that I can sell my own tickets… just stop acting like that I’m just helping you… for what? Because as I’ve said I wat you to win.
Hey… hey.. hey wait you’re Celine Villa right?... yes why?....will you make it fast can’t you see I’m .so busy selling my tickets, what is that all about celine said. You know Bret Allan Jackson you’re boy friend selling the tickets of vannah Ramirez . the one of the candidate for miss campus sweet heart? … what are you serious?.... hmmmmffff… yes I saw him at the alpha Capha omega room selling five tickets for one kiss. Is bret’s going crazy?,, Lets go girls I want to see them…
Hi Bret…” mhhuuwahh” what are you doing here?... I’m selling the tickets of miss vannah Ramirez.. oh I see, why are you doing these bret? For charity hahahahaha… no I’m just helping her… for what celine saked is vannah is your new girl friend?... of course not… oh come on bret why are you doing this I’m also your friend rigth if you don’t mind can you please do me a favor?... yeah sure what is it?... can you please sell also my tickets?... no I will not do that because I have many tickets here and I promised to miss vannah to sell all her tickets and I will support her… okay fine I’ll go ahead … I’m sorry Celine I hope you understand.
At the coffee shop vannah and rikki are talking… how many tickets did you sold rikki ? good news I sold 10 pads. What about you?. I sold 2pads only. I told you I’m not qualified for that. Don’t worry Bret is helping us… hhhmmmff….
Hey miss Cheska Vannah Ramirez right?... yes I am.. hi I’m Celine Villa…. Oh yeah I know you you are also a candidate for miss campus sweet heart… I their any thing wrong? What can I do for you vannah asked… I’ll be honest with you please live my boy friend are you obsess with him?... shout up how dare you to say that excuse me miss I’m not that kind of girl you was talking for. In fact Mr. Bret Allan Jackson is you’re ex boy friend rigth? So how dare you to act like that… and besides don’t worry I’m not interested with Bret… now you can please live us now… it’s not of your business if bret sells my tickets . can you please live us alone. We have our own business to discuss. And yet Celine was so speechless.
Hey Vannah can I talk to you?Bret asked , Bret pulled her hands I want to talk to you ... okay fine.he pulled her in the art building at the maintenance room. Bret hold her hands. Why do you bring me here. I didn’t realize I pulled on you she growled with irritation. You’re a mean vannah said are you really that merciless, or do you just really hate me because I’m american. We are not close vannah said. I have to go I have a class at these time. Okay fine Bret open the door but suddenly “ shit were trapped”. Ha? But why are you kidding? Hey don’t worry we won’t be trapped here for long. The janitor in this building will soon find us. It’s all you’re fault vannah said … hey don’t blame me, things happen for a reason. So why don’t we take this opportunity to get to know each other. Vannah lean on the wall, and take a deep breath. You’re so different. “You don’t even know how to say sorry” because I said everything happens for a reason. They all happen to make way for other significant occurrences. In our lives or other people. So there is nothing to be sorry for. I didn’t believe you say that . you’re the only person I know that you believe on that. Vannah said.. well I have a first experience. My mom said I was the biggest mistake in her life. I was born by accident, by mistake , if I treated my life as one big mistake like the way she treated me, maybe I won’t be who I am now. She was shocked with him . I wasn’t treated well by my mom so does that should feel sorry for my self for the rest of my life.
I don’t believe you’re a easy going and naughty you have a problem in your mom. I believe I turn out well I am a big mistake do you agree? She smiled. Hey mister Janitor can you please help us we are trapped here. Thanks God somebody will help us to live here. I told you somebody will find us.
At the school theater the most awaited event was held the search for miss campus sweet heart 2011. every one are excited. The family of vannah are all present. Because they will support and pray so that vannah will win in this contest.everytime vannah is taking the floor everyone is standing ovation. They are shouting for the name of vannah. And the most awaited part the question and answer portion. May we call on contestant number 9 miss Celine villa here is your question. “ what is the essence of being a woman” thank you for that wonderful question the essence of being a woman is.. is.. is.. is… how do you prepare for your future. How you make your life complete that’s all thank you.. now may we call on contestant number 14 miss Cheska Vannah Ramirez. Here is your question. “ how do you prepare for this wonderful night” before I answer that question I want to greet my family, my friends and specially the people that supported me right now. Good evening to all of you. Now how I prepare for this night is first I prepare my self and thank god to given me stregth. And specially I prepare my self that no matter what happen win or loose I will do my best that’s all thank you.
The judge will soon announced the winner. This is the criteria for judging. Personality 25%, question and answer 25%, talent 25%, audience impact 10%, voting 15% with a total of 100%. To announce the winner may we call on our president Mr. Kelvin Yap. Garnering with the total score of 98.67% or SCU campus sweet heart 2011, is no other than candidate number 14 miss cheska vannah Ramirez… every one are happy , everyone are shouting. You deserve it that’s my daugther said mr. ramirez.
After seven months , Vannah and Bret see each other at the coffee shop. Hi vannah how are you?... oh hi Bret I’m fine how about you… I’m fine come join me you want coffee?... hhmmm yes!... by the way thanks for helping me to miss campus sweet heart… welcome, I told you you’re the next miss campus sweet heart…thanks for supporting me… it’s okay never mind that… thanks again for what you’ve done I don’t know how can I pay you for what you did… what if I invite you for a dinner?.. Huh a dinner? Yes a dinner date on Tuesday maybe if it is okay with you… okay no problem.. okay thanks, I will pick up you on Tuesday evening at exactly 7:00 o’clock if it is okay with you… yeah sure…
At 7:00 o’clock in the evening Bret goes to vannah’s house “beep, beep, beep, beep”… yaya will you please open the gate maybe it’s Bret Allan Jackson my visitor. Hi sir Good evening, please come in… good evening too, where is vannah?... she is on her room sir wait I will call her… vannah you have a visitor he is on the living room… for a while yaya…
Good evening sir Bret said to vannah’s Father…. I’m Bret Allan Jackson… Good evening too I’m Mr. Angelo Ramirez Vannah’s father… where will you go? At the Rock well sir if you don’t mind I hace a dinner with your daughther sir… that’s okay with me but bring my daughther here at exactly 11:00 o’clock, and please take care of my daugthershe is pa precious to me so please take care of her… yes sir I will do what you say I will bring here at exactly 11:00 o’clock… Hey sweetie Bret is waiting for you so please hurry up… yes Dad.
Bret saw Vannah wearing red dress and Red high heels… you’re so pretty for this night… thank you… can we go now… yes… sir can we go now?... yes but plese take care of her, and do what I say… yes sir thank you for trusting me….
At the restaurant, Bret is so gentle man . he prepared a romantic dinner, with red flowers, romantic music, and candle light in a very romantic place… I rent this restaurant for this night. And I prepare it for you, I hope you like it… yes I like it, I don’t believe there’s a man do it for me and besides this was dreamed by every woman to date with somebody, in a nice and romantic place.
Waiter, good evening sir ma’am. Vannah you can order everything you want. There is a romantic song while they are eating. Vannah you want ice cream Bret asked… yes that .is my favorite the cookies and cream flavor…while vannah is eating the ice cream there’s a ring inside… what is this? vannah asked… Bret get the ring and kneel beside her… Vannah can you be my Girl friend? Bret asked…and vannah was so speechless I waited for this moment come. So I asked you again vannah can you be my girl friend? Bret close his eyes because he is afraid whether vannah will say yes or no.. and finally vannah say “ Yes I can be your girl friend” . and Bret was so happy because finally vannah is now his Girl friend.